Pitch and Feedback

My pitch:

After doing my pitch, my teacher informed me that this was a good idea and that the song was appropriate with good intertextual references, but to be careful that my homage doesn’t turn into copying. To ensure that this doesn’t happen, I will make sure to include lots of original shots that don’t copy any of the references I’m trying to make in my shot list, mixed in with the shot that mimic the films I’m paying homage to. I was also advised to have a boy lip-synch the song as the actual song is sung by a man, which I have as I have one of my talents Charlie singing.